Some of jokes were funny, and the music was good but the whole thing didn't work brilliantly....
Still quite good, but a bit random (and short) for my liking.
I liked it
I thought it was pointless, but I did rather like it.
BTW, you need to apostrophise its in "it(')s loading"
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